The one on deviantarts is the correct size, but you mistakenly uploaded the one for ants here.
Huh, that's weird. I just reuploaded and it seems to be fixed. Thanks for pointing that out!
Clever twist, and foreshadowed well too!
I'm glad you noticed the foreshadowing haha
Haha, I really need to track down this woman ;)
You describe transformations well. The expression "shlucking sound" works really well too. Simple yet clever plot. I like the detail about the new girls' hug!!! = ) This was great read!fj
Glad you enjoyed the description! :D
Aw, I'm sure she'd be happy to oblige if they just asked.
Maybe! But I don't think they want to take that chance :P
I like how they think they need to trick Isabelle. I wonder what would happen if one of them just asked for the transformation?
I could see how they might be worried about ruining their opportunity haha. They wouldn't want to be that guy/girl to mess up a good thing :P
The one on deviantarts is the correct size, but you mistakenly uploaded the one for ants here.
ReplyDeleteHuh, that's weird. I just reuploaded and it seems to be fixed. Thanks for pointing that out!
DeleteClever twist, and foreshadowed well too!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you noticed the foreshadowing haha
DeleteHaha, I really need to track down this woman ;)
ReplyDeleteYou describe transformations well. The expression "shlucking sound" works really well too. Simple yet clever plot. I like the detail about the new girls' hug!!! = ) This was great read!
ReplyDeletefj
Glad you enjoyed the description! :D
DeleteAw, I'm sure she'd be happy to oblige if they just asked.
ReplyDeleteMaybe! But I don't think they want to take that chance :P
DeleteI like how they think they need to trick Isabelle. I wonder what would happen if one of them just asked for the transformation?
ReplyDeleteI could see how they might be worried about ruining their opportunity haha. They wouldn't want to be that guy/girl to mess up a good thing :P
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