This is the best set-up yet. Excellent work. It will be fun watching the three protagonists maintaining their own personalities while navigating working with a new body with or without an unwanted partner. One caution. This is too good of a story and set-up to devolve to porn. Seriously, the potential nuances and your skills would be drowned with the introduction of explicit porn. TRUST the reader. Do it implicitly and the reader will fill in all the gaps from their imagination.
I appreciate it! Always great to have well thought-out comments like this, really makes it worthwhile. No promises on the no explicit porn part, but it's going to be minimal if it does appear, I promise that! Next part out tomorrow :)
Finally we move on.
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This is the best set-up yet. Excellent work. It will be fun watching the three protagonists maintaining their own personalities while navigating working with a new body with or without an unwanted partner.
ReplyDeleteOne caution. This is too good of a story and set-up to devolve to porn. Seriously, the potential nuances and your skills would be drowned with the introduction of explicit porn. TRUST the reader. Do it implicitly and the reader will fill in all the gaps from their imagination.
I appreciate it! Always great to have well thought-out comments like this, really makes it worthwhile. No promises on the no explicit porn part, but it's going to be minimal if it does appear, I promise that! Next part out tomorrow :)
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